[@Keyblade87]: I think there's a [i]lot[/i] you need to add, tbh. Ability-wise, I'd like a LOT more than just 'can perform multiple styles of martial arts'. That's so incredibly vague that it can be abused, and while I don't think people here are the type to do so, it's better to tie up any loose ends imho. Lots of fleshing out there. Also, be specific as to how the qi is applied to your character for combat. Personality... Another paragraph or two, please? It feels kinda... Empty with just two sentences. History is... Also actually short, imo. tl;dr: Flesh every section out, please.