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Took two months on my end, but I'm finally back in the game. Hopefully this post is at least [i]slightly[/i] decent, but considering I had to start and stop it so many times between being busy, being sick and being blocked up mentally I'll be lucky if it's even coherent XD

With luck my next post should come much sooner and also wrap up the first little Orson arc so Danny doesn't have to share screentime with kung fu Indiana Jones and I can free up for more ideas for a little interquel that goes deeper into Danny and his life when an old man hasn't interrupted it for a mystical quest while also advancing his plot.
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Glad to hear you're back into it. You went on your hiatus just as I had read your posts and was prepared to give you the feedback you had wanted haha. I'm sure I've forgotten most of the thoughts I originally had on them, but let me know if you're still looking for feedback.