[@masterwriter234]

Look, I'm sure there are a lot of people around that think your character is fine, there are probably masses in other places that worship you as an incredible RPer and would sell their soul for your.... "skill..." However, none of that matters in this particular situation. The fact of the matter is, your character sheet, by THIS rp's standards, is unacceptable. I'm not saying your character is stupid, badly thought out, or any of those things, I'm simply saying that he's too far in a different direction to effectively and enjoyably RP with in this story. Please remember that RP is NOT about self-gratification, it's a multiplayer affair, and your responsibility as an RPer is to make the experience enjoyable to all involved parties, not just for yourself. That's not to say you're not to have fun, it's simply to say that you're not the only one who's supposed to be having fun; have as much fun as you want, just make sure the person you're RPing with is also enjoying themself.

That said, you have two options here. You can either create a new, believable character for the world we've established, or you can try again with some other rp. Because I am NOT accepting that sheet as is.