[@Ashevelendar] Until RBY's on, I can lend you a hand real quick? Here we go: [hider=BREAK DOWN, BREAK DOWN] 1. [quote]Appearance[/quote] We'd prefer a sprite or a drawing as opposed to a picture of an IRL person, but I don't think we'll be splitting hairs over this if the general takeaway from this is 'redhead'; I WOULD recommend maybe finding a better picture, though, since besides just being a somewhat poor quality mugshot, there's a dodgy-looking watermark down in the corner there that COULD potentially be a problem. 2. [quote]Personality: Alexis is a friendly little gal. Born in a pokemon trainer family she loves Pokemons and would do anything to protect Pokemons from those that would want to harm them. She's ready to fight anyone that attacks her friends or those that attack Pokemons. [/quote] I'd consider expanding this at least a little bit, it's functional but a tiny bit limited as a reference. Does Alexis have any emotional skeletons in her closet or any flaws worth mentioning? Anything you could possibly wring a second paragraph out of? 3. [quote]Brief Bio: Alexis was born into a family of Pokemon Trainers and since she was in dipers she grew with Pokemon all over the house. Her parents never tried their training skills at a gym or something but decided it's better just to grow Pokemon and save them from peril if needed be. Alexis's mother worked at the local Care Center for Pokemon and her father was the local Gym Leader's Helper. Alexis learned to take care of Pokemons as soon as she grew up. Her Torchic was her friend since she was born and it was only normal when she had to choose a starting Pokemon , she would choose Torchic as it. [/quote] One formatting error and possible general expansion/elaboration aside, this is fine; there's one character coming who also had their Starter before the journey, so I don't think that'll be a problem. 4. [quote]Starter Pokemon: Torchic Starter's Personality: Alexis's Torchic is a nice little fellow. Loyal to the end to Alexis , he is ready to burn anyone he needs to save her trainer. They both grew up together and they were best friends before Alexis knew how to talk. [/quote] We DID mention in the OP that canon starters couldn't be used as starters here, but that's a rule from an older version of the RP and I can talk to RBY about nixing it? If not, I can help you find another starter, since everything else is fine.[/hider] [@AtaxiaIV] One issue we forgot to bring up; Gible's line is Pseudo-Legendary, which the CS mentioned couldn't be used as starters. You're free to capture a Gible on the journey if you end up accepted, but you might want to find an alternative for your starter? I can track down the dibs list to help you find something fitting, if you'd like.