[@User] This would be an administrator or government official tasked with investigating the status of the colony. As the Willman Lab was a private enterprise that was merely government-sponsored (it was founded and run by Dr. Russell, not specifically by any one government), that means it wasn't run by a governor or council. Therefore, the GC is worried that some sort of mismanagement or administrative problem caused the communication breakdown.

[@The1Rolling1Boy] There are a couple pretty big flaws with your CS. While I like the character, it is a bit unreasonable to have a mechanical engineer (who would have needed at least four years of undergraduate education, not to mention graduate) be nineteen years old, unless she were some sort of savant. Even then, that age would be a stretch. As for your strengths and weaknesses, I disagree with BurningCold's observation -- someone can absolutely be mentally strong (as in, intelligence) and emotionally weak (as in, fortitude and control of their emotions). However, I would have liked a bit more description in these. How is she emotionally weak? Does she crack under pressure, or is it a matter of being exposed to awful events which cause her to melt down? Also, how is she strong? That is a rather vague identifier. 

As for affiliation, I won't knock you on that -- I clearly didn't do a great job of setting that up or explaining that. In fact, [@BurningCold] you did it wrong in your CS too, I just let it slide. Affiliation was supposed to designate what political bloc your character lived in (EU, Commonwealth, etc) not the planet they were born. However, I'm just going to remove it since it is redundant, and include a line for birth planet.