[@Crazy Doctor] Sweet :3 Your CS looks really good! The power is supah dank. As far as weaknesses goes, just make sure you explain what impact something has on the power. For example, fear of the power is an okay limitation just as long as you explain how the fear would prevent the actual use of the power, not just create reluctance. Fear as an inhibitor not as a side effect. The social anxiety bit (I'll just call it that for now) and emotion thing needs to go under personality. You could talk about the power being tied to her emotions (like in Stardust where the star glows when she's happy) and then keep the social anxiety stuff in weaknesses because, when Nikki isn't happy, she isn't glowing, or something like that. The nightmare bit could go under quirks and habits. I like your content, it just needs a bit of sorting and tidying. :) [@Treue] and [@Witch Cat] You guys answer all the questions when I'm not here and I love it. And with all this community stuff! Helping everyone out!! I love it so much! So helpful. <3 [@Dusksong] I think that the questions everyone are asking are good, but feel free to take or leave them. You could add your details to what you have and make it the most thorough CS in all of RP history. I think that you're clear to put your CS up now if you'd like. There aren't any inconsistencies or against-the-rules things happening. Welcome aboard friend! [@PrettyWings] Sweet! I look forward to it! [@Daisedconfused] I actually really like the idea of having the characters spar with each other. Maybe at some point the [s]wardens[/s] supervisors would assign "superhero teams" so that these kids could learn to use their powers to help each other. I don't know about serial numbers, but that could be something to look into. The system could be first initial, last initial, 6 digit birthday (i.e. VA082802). I guess Vinny's b-day is oct. 28th now. :P About the gender balance in this RP, so much estrogen. I don't know if I should feel bad for Vincent, Alexander, and Daniyal or not, LOL. Go ahead and create a male character if you want. We can also gently encourage newcomers to create male characters... I LOVE YOU NERDS! This is going so well, I'm so happy. X3