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@Golem: Okay, this is sounding fine to me, now. And as Rin said, they'd probably be turned away from certain portions of the Temple District.As for your character, I'd like to see her personality fleshed out a bit more but otherwise she looks fine.
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Yeah, flesh out the personality a little and she'll be fine to go. ^_^