I... know nothing about poetry, so I can attempt writing it when I learned the rules, but I sure as heck can't critique it! Good thing we have McHaggis here, I suppose! XD

Edit: Ah. It says "alternating quatrains". What's "alternating"!? Should something change between the different quatrains!? Something I don't know and have definitely messed up!? AAaaaah, I'm doomed...