[quote=@McHaggis]
Side-note: playing with the format is cool if there's a reason for it. Edwin Morgan does it in his sonnets quite a bit. So you [i]can[/i] rhyme something four times instead of twice, just gotta... have a reason.
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My excuse, personally, is that I really REALLY like repetition.

Hush your face it's perfectly reasonable.

As is intentionally getting the format wrong with the flimsy excuse of "OP Said..." in order to do even more repetition.