I ATTEMPTED AND FAILED TO WRITE REVIEWS, I DON'T KNOW WHAT I'M DOING HELP ME I'M SCARED, BUT I WANTED TO GIVE FEEDBACK, SO *hides in corner*

[hider=Self Abused]... Well, it sounds right. Just a few strange sounding sentences. Particularly the two in the end of the third quatrain.

Other than that, yikes, what a dark text. Nobody around to save this poor fellow? … Yikes, that's terrifying. … Oh, well.

Er. Isn't the two last lines supposed to rhyme?[/hider]

[hider=Julie]... I'M CONFUSED AS HECK! XD

OK, I kind of get the first part, but everything after ”Til” makes no sense to me. What? XD

Is she just... complaining? I think she's complaining. Poetic complaining. Woah.[/hider]

[hider=Dream to Wake]... It looks fine? It looks fine. A bit basic a subject, some weird lines, not sure if transpire rhymes with undesired, but otherwise it looks fine? I dunno.

“Cause our minds offense” sounds odd. Actually, many of these lines sound just, like, “acceptably off”, but still slightly off. … Maybe. I dunno.

But heh, those last words were inspiring somehow. … A mini-dose of inspiration. Hahahaha.[/hider]

[hider=The Battle of Guadalcanal]Immediately thrown off by that the first sentence has nine and not ten syllables. … No, wait, it's consistent! Is it fine if it's consistent!? AAH, I DON'T KNOW! *panics*

Wait, what!? Beer can line broke the consistency! It's ten syllables, not nine! … And the chooses to remember line has eleven! Was that intended? Is that fine? Did it break a rule? I DON'T KNOW! XD

Well. Um. Otherwise, quite an understandable tale. Poor sailor. Yeah, he'll have to live with that. … Oh, well.[/hider]

[hider=The Western Sun]... Is “o'er” intended to be a single syllable?

Well. Looks to me that you're following all the rules? Maybe rhyming quite a few s-words with something without the s, but maybe that's fine.

And the story... it's vague, but I believe I can make it out. … Or I can't. Actually, reading it a few more times, I'm pretty sure I can't! XD[/hider]

[hider=Werewolf's Wife]... Is “Rheinfelden” two syllables? … “caring” is two syllables, right? … “to'er” is supposed to be one syllable, right? Can one do that? Make two words into one to cut the syllable count... … And I want to add a syllable to the second to last line... … ...

I don't know the rules of syllable-counts, I just know the rules I attempted to abide. OH, WELL!

So, uh. Did she make him lunch? I think she did, if I'm not horribly misinterpreting this. Hahaha. Oh, well.[/hider]

[hider=Untitled]... Huh. The internet says every is two syllables. Guess I've been pronouncing an e that I shouldn't. Hahahaha. … But if so, what's the point of writing it “ev'ry” in the last line!? You used it right without consequence in the beginning of the third quatrain! XD

… “Does matter not” sounds awkward. As does “accept does she”. I'm not entirely sure what “fore'er” is supposed to be, couldn't you have gotten that to rhyme any other way? Oh, well. Writing like that is a pain, I totally understand. Hahaha.

… So, she's getting revenge, does she? … Poor girl. Oh, well.[/hider]

I apologize if I got everything wrong and offended someone. Woah. Hahahahahaha. … … …