[quote=@Sep] (I should point out I was sincere with the nice aspiration bit) I have seen people take such criticism and churn out really nice sheets before, it's a style I've always adopted I don't beat around the bush. If I don't accept someone I tell them exactly why I don't accept them how else are they supposed to correct any possible issues? I never mean any offense in such reviews, nor do I intend to be rude if people wish to view it as that then that is their own personal choice. [@Heat] and [@Vietmyke] have both been in Roleplays where I've been entrusted to mark sheets before and can both attest that this method works, I did the same thing to [@Boomlover] and he absolutely loves this Roleplay, as does [@LegionPothIX] and I did the same thing to his initial sheet (through the Guild and Discord so it's not all evident on the thread). I'm sad to see you not stick around but at the end of the day that is your choice. [/quote] I've roleplayed with you before Sep and I know that you're not a bad guy, but when I first joined the guild I took on an advanced roleplay, I put a lot of time into a character sheet only to have my hard work picked apart and made fun of, it ruined my first experience and I left for a good while before I decided to take another crack at the guild. When it comes down to it, it may work for some people, but it may also have the exact opposite effect, simply just being nice and pointing out the errors where they stand still helps. Where as White may not be a popular name, it's still a name used today, since the year 2008 there have been 7 million recorded White's. So picking on his name choice seems rather silly to me. I'm only thinking about his feelings in the matter and I know I wouldn't have taken your list of errors very well. Like I said, you have a lot of solid valuable points there that aren't put in a potentially upsetting manner, but some of the others could have gone without being voiced, maybe next time a little empathy and kindness can be ushered into your CS refusal.