[@Jozarin] You control [i]a[/i] character, much the same as most other RPs. You're allowed to make multiple characters, but they'll require separate sheets each. [@Kafka Komedy] I'll do a more detailed analysis of your character sheet once it's more complete, but it looks mostly good at the moment. I'll say that Caledfwlch's ability may require some moderation, and I'd also like to confirm that Johnny's not actually in America right now, which is pretty anti-chimera for the time being. Regarding your questions, I imagine there aren't any organisations specifically dedicated to anti-Draconid activities, beyond perhaps the counter-terrorist organisations which would handle the Splendent Brood similarly to other terrorist organisations, but if you want to create an organisation or military subsection dedicated to anti-Draconid tactics (since dragons are extinct, remember), you can feel free to develop a group along those lines. [@bluetommy2] [s]Solaris and I discussed this, and came to the conclusion that no, something along those lines isn't really possible - it's sort of a whole-hog deal, where you either get the superhuman animal DNA and all the appearance changes that come with that, or you're just a regular-ass human, albeit one with access to gene tech to ensure peak fitness and whatnot the same as most other humans get. You could also get a human-tier biomod, if you want something like animal ears and tails or possibly even an arm that looks like a chimera arm... but when cybernetics can do similar things with far greater (for humans) effectiveness, that's rather counterproductive.[/s] Answer edited, see below for the reasons why. And since you have brought that up... [@Banana] Glad to see you're interested. That said, and whilst the character seems mostly reasonable out of context, I and Solaris both strongly feel like you've missed the point of chimeras, as well as the setting in general. To go over the list of my qualms with the character you've developed... [hider=The List of Qualms] 1. Minor issues with the first four sections: "18 in human years" ought to just be "18", since it's not like he's lost lifespan by acquiring dog DNA; it might be intentional, but please avoid misspelling the word "boy"; and... Pupperdoggo. 1.5. No actually that deserves its own section. Not to be a dick about his nickname, but it halfway seems like you came up with "Pupperdoggo" solely based on that Imgur meme, then developed the character around that rather than anything else, to the point that the [i]human[/i] is literally named "puppy" in Spanish, whilst the [i]dog[/i] is given a name generally reserved for humans. It's very jarring, and I'd prefer him to have a different name than that. 2. Going back to bluetommy's question, your character's face would look a lot more like a Pomeranian than you've suggested. It would also be covered in fur, as would the rest of his body... and speaking of which, what colour of fur? Pomeranians come in multiple colours. 3. A bit more of a personality would be appreciated. You've mostly listed things he does and does not like, with no indication of his actual personality [i]traits[/i]. Is he shy around girls? Does he get along well with kids? How does he act in public compared to in private? Those are just examples of questions you could answer in the Personality section. 4. I get the distinct impression that your character's family is extraordinarily backward for the times, even within the context of... central America, I presume, since Husks are involved. The point about his family's backwardness is just an observation, but I would actually like to know which country your character was raised in, and for that matter where he is as of the present day, which I notice you also avoided mentioning. 5. Just to make this absolutely clear: barring rare exceptions, the Husks are not the sort of beings which negotiate, and they would not wait for permission to gain control of the farm. They'd swarm in, kill everything in sight, and turn the bodies into Husks afterward, barring the rare examples of Moderates which might preserve the Pomeranians for future farming purposes. That section of the bio is fine as far as structure goes, since it doesn't appear to contradict anything I just said, but I'm just making sure we (the both of us and everyone else) are on the same page here. 6. So, somewhere in human-occupied territory, a group of [i]chimera[/i] scientists- and on that topic, chimera [i]scientists[/i] in an area they'd probably be actively prevented from even being in, never mind funded for- kidnap an orphaned teenager and his dog off the streets, convert the human into a chimera with apparently no consent on the human's part, and just for good measure kill his dog for reasons of what I can only assume is dickheadedness, because the techniques needed to acquire DNA are as simple as extracting a blood sample even in the modern age, after which the genome can be stored as data and replicated as many times as is needed by the relevant machines. FOX News would have a field day with THAT story. More importantly, it beggars the question of what the hell that group IS, where they're operating from... really, [i]any[/i] information about this group of chimera scientists, other than their access to gene-splicing technology. 7. Yeah, about that soul thing... I know there's magic, and much more advanced technology and all, but that's not helped to prove or disprove the existence of souls in any way, and certainly not ways that the public would know of. Besides, your character received DNA from the dog. That's hardly the equivalent of having some of the dog's soul transferred into his body. 8. AND the scientists held him prisoner until he turned into a werewolf and killed them all. And then he began travelling as a children's entertainer, with little precedent for it. And again, no present day location is given. 9. Oh by the way lycanthropy doesn't exist in this setting. His other skills seem fine, though he wouldn't need the colourblindness, since he's still got all the human cone cells. 9.5. In fact, and as a pointer to future signers-on, very little fantastic stuff does exist beyond magic and what that logically allows for when going by its own rules and those of natural physics, e.g. dragons. Yes that has a logical in-setting explanation. So do Husks. Basically, this is not a high fantasy setting, nor is the sci-fi as soft as some people might think... though to be fair, it's not as hard as I'd like either, but human-animal DNA merging exists, as do the logical consequences of DNA which can handle that, so what're ya gonna do? 10. The Bionetics section is literally the first and last time lizard DNA has been mentioned, and in that case you might as well just say "the scientists installed a biomod derived from lizard DNA that allows for rapid regeneration", rather than having him actually be part-lizard, since again, that'd result in significant physical changes. 11. A Pomeranian-sized collar is not going to fit around a human-sized neck, unless it inexplicably has a ton of extra length that risks the extrusion being caught on something whilst worn by the intended user. You also never explained where he gets a sword from, and swords are not inherently unsafe for chimeras to wield anyway. They just prefer their natural weapons, which are more than a match for most technological equivalents anyway, when they aren't using ranged biomods to counter the guns most humans would likely use in a fight. Then again, if the user is wielding the sword [i]in their teeth,[/i] they kind of deserve to have said teeth ripped out or broken in half when the inevitable block or parry happens. [/hider] Long story short, Banana, this is kind of a similar situation to what happened before in the Worm RP: you could make those changes to the character, but at this stage, you may as well just scrap the idea and come up with something relatively new. Incidentally, since I know nobody else is going to read that much text, let's reiterate a few important points that everyone ought to be aware of, if they're not already clear: [quote]...barring rare exceptions, the Husks are not the sort of beings which negotiate, and they would not wait for permission to gain control of [insert location]. They'd swarm in, kill everything in sight, and turn the bodies into Husks afterward, barring the rare examples of Moderates which might preserve the Pomeranians for future farming purposes.[/quote] [quote]...there's magic, and much more advanced technology... but that's not helped to prove or disprove the existence of souls in any way, and certainly not ways that the public would know of.[/quote] [quote]...very little fantastic stuff does exist beyond magic and what that logically allows for when going by its own rules and those of natural physics, e.g. dragons. Yes that has a logical in-setting explanation. So do Husks. Basically, this is not a high fantasy setting, nor is the sci-fi as soft as some people might think... though to be fair, it's not as hard as I'd like either, but human-animal DNA merging exists, as do the logical consequences of DNA which can handle that, so what're ya gonna do?[/quote] [quote]...swords are not inherently unsafe for chimeras to wield anyway. They just prefer their natural weapons, which are more than a match for most technological equivalents anyway, when they aren't using ranged biomods to counter the guns most humans would likely use in a fight.[/quote]