[quote=@Halvtand] Character Name: Seth of Valeria. Alias: None, yet. Age: 21. Race: human. Gender: Male. Height: 6'1”. Weight: ca 170 lbs. Hair Color: Mostly black, but with a few shots of dark brown throughout it all. The hair is kept short and over all well managed. Eye Color: Normal human eyes, green. Visual Description: [hider=pic][img]http://th09.deviantart.net/fs7/PRE/i/2005/192/1/4/Vaitz_the_swordsman_by_Archaia.jpg[/img][/hider] Written Description: Seth of Valeria is a beautiful young man that have practiced a long time with his sword. Although he has a lot of formal training behind him he lacks experience and as such, all the cool scars that will make all the ladies swoon. What he has on the other hand is a certain charisma or aura of confidence that will trigger the old groveling-reflex in the lower born. Level: 1. Class: Swordsman/Mercenary. Abilities: [color=ed1c24][b]1. Cleave – Wielding a large twohanded sword seems like a lot of work with low payoff for most people. One of the perks is an unstoppable attack that can hit multiple foes and that cannot be blocked unless it is done with a blocking ability. (Can be dodged) 2. Cry of valour – As a natural born leader the user can release a cry that will inspire any ally nearby and infuse them with a will to give their all. [/b][/color] Skills: 1. Social chameleon – There are few people Seth cannot speak to, at least for a short while until they realise that he's actually full of crap. 2. Animal handling – Riding a horse, training a dog or hunting with a falcon. The user may not be an expert, but is indeed more skilled than a layman. Weapon: Great sword. Personality: The most apparent feature of Seth’s personality is his charisma. He is a true nobleman, able to charm people left and right. He has a way with worlds and a sort of natural authority that makes people pay attention to him. On top of this, he also has IT. No one can specify or explain what IT is, yet everyone know. Something about him makes women weak, and men jealous of his very being. IT does not work on everyone, but a surprising amount of people will either like or dislike Seth on a first glance because of it. Coupled with his own natural charm and charisma, Seth can often choose whether he will spend the night alone or with someone. As a young man full of dreams Seth wants to build a better world for everyone, except orcs. Quirks: Uptight and clean to no end. Behaves like a nobleman. Likes: Dancing, epic tales, young women, beer and wine, money. Dislikes: Orcs, goblins, warlocks and other monsters. Inventory: Empty. [/quote] Your skills are a little vague. I need to know how many opponents your "Cleave" move can hit; and as for your "Cry of Valor" move, I need to know what it does exactly for the party. What aspect does it buff? Also, no more fighter classes and no more "Great Swords." I think two Great Swords is already enough for such a small party. If we get enough people (6+) for a second team, then yeah that team can do whatever it wants, but it's important to have a variety of roles in a team. Archer, Mage, Thief, Tank is what I'm hoping to get at this point. Of course, you can pick whatever class name you want for it. But that role is what I'm looking for.