[@TalijaKey][@Raizin] You both look good to me now. ^^ 

[@Gareth] Sorry, only just saw your Cs. It isn't bad, just a few things. 

One: you need an image so I know what he looks like.

Two: You will be in a cave, so you can't really go 'High in the sky'

Three: Your power is rather useless, I'd choose another power if I were you.

[@Maria 127] Mytle needs a personality, but other than that, you're good.