[@Minato Namikaze] Yeah, they pegged it, friend.  You need to separate speakers by a paragraph.  You might break some of those chunks of text up in other ways, too.  They're just a bit awkward to read.  

Also, problem with the post.  Did you read the other posts, or the CSes attached to the characters, before posting?  Kassidy(Kyrisse's character)'s mum owns and operates the Cafe, and in her post they haven't left to open up shop yet.  So it's not open right now.  A good thing to do would be to arrive just before it opens, and be there when they arrive to unlock the door.  

And Zoey works there, too, so it's kind of weird for you to interact with an NPC when there's a bunch of player characters in that exact position that could have been there for you to talk to.  

A lot of people have posted, and people need to start intersecting each other, otherwise we're all in a stalemate with nothing but long introductory posts.  

[@OfWindAndRain] You could have Alex run into Audrey, it would actually work pretty well.  Audrey is looking for answers, and is willing to hang out with anyone who can help her piece things together.  Alex, meanwhile, just wants to be close to people.  

Audrey is actually kind of a plot bait right now, her investigation(she's looking for Solomon, AKA the white streak) will lead to scenes that make the supernatural nature of events impossible to deny for those who see them.