Have you by chance read any of R.A. Salvatore's novels? Your character reminds me a bit of one or two of his Sharlotta Vespers comes to mind. 

I think you put the attire description in the physical description. I'm allowing images but I want us to make this writing first and foremost. Is she athletic, plump, curvaceous, what color are her eyes and what is her hair like? Anything stand out? Physical deformities even? etc. 

I also [u]like[/u] you put other notes, but remember we're not using dice rolls so the 1d10 is null.