[quote=@Hippo AF] [b][u][color=FF00FF]Name/Alias/Title:[/color] Draco [/u][/b] [indent] The Master of Demons, The Demon Mage [/indent] [color=FF00FF][b][u]Appearance:[/u][/b][/color] [img]http://img01.deviantart.net/7607/i/2016/206/f/e/battler_ushiromiya_render_by_ayumeka-d9178k6.png[/img] [color=FF00FF][b][u]Quote:[/u][/b][/color] "Those who fight me are a disease, I am merely the Cure" [youtube]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NcVxbUgzNGU&index=11&list=PLJmy6JoyMaC8Wbrs_6jOZ6v_iOjRga7Jt[/youtube] [color=FF00FF][b][u]Age:[/u][/b][/color] 19 [color=FF00FF][b][u]Gender:[/u][/b][/color] Male [color=FF00FF][b][u]Sexuality:[/u][/b][/color] Straight [color=FF00FF][b][u]Race:[/u][/b][/color] (Human or Magic-User) Magic-User [color=FF00FF][b][u]Magi-Talent:[/u][/b][/color] Draco has the ability to summon various beings, however, his twisted nature has signed on contracts of using Demons as his main forces. [color=FF00FF][b][u]Habits/ticks/quirks [i](etc)[/i]:[/u][/b][/color][list] [*]Often sighs at doing anything [*]Speaking his mind [*]Humming a specific tune [/list] [color=FF00FF][b][u]Skills/Talents/etc.:[/u][/b][/color][list] [*]Draco has a very large pool of magic and so can create many summons [*]Is extremely fast, almost moving so fast it looks like teleporting [*]His skills with a dagger are unparalleled [/list] [color=FF00FF][b][u]Likes:[/u][/b][/color][list] [*]Being lazy [*]Being left alone [*]Cake [/list] [color=FF00FF][b][u]Dislikes:[/u][/b][/color][list] [*]Fighting [*]Both Humans and Magic-Users [*]Carrot [/list] [color=FF00FF][b][u]Personality:[/u][/b][/color] [indent]Draco not only dislikes Humans, but also Magic-Users. He dislikes having to live amongst this never ending war. His life has been damaged over and over and has shaped his personality. He is a very quiet man, with an accompanying expressionless face that even in battle, rarely changes. He hates working but will always follow orders from his superiors, but will complain softly. [/indent] [color=FF00FF][b][u]Bio/History:[/u][/b][/color] [indent]Draco has always been alone, living isolated, practicing his magic. He has managed to master his summoning and has learnt that the smallest portion of arcane magic can summon his companion, an Eagle, shrouded in darkness but also able to speak. Draco has never settled anywhere, always moving around to lower the chances of confrontation. A small human army learned of his whereabouts and quickly dispatched to attack him, but in his defense and last ditch effort, Draco summoned fifty Demons, a feat many couldn't believe as summoning 1 demon was a challenge itself, his name quickly spread from ear to ear, making his existence harder to be discreet. [/indent] [color=FF00FF][b][u]Equipment/Tools/Items/etc.:[/u][/b][/color][list] [*]A small dagger with an engraving of a Demon on the blade [*]Cloak [*]Backup dagger [/list] [color=FF00FF][b][u]Other:[/u][/b][/color] [indent] Draco will often fight hand-to-hand, using his magic ability rarely as he doesn't like using it. [/indent] [/quote] This character is great, but there is one issue. With his ability, along with power of said ability, there is a skill which concerns me a little. "Is extremely fast, almost moving so fast it looks like teleporting" That's more like A magi-power, super-speed. Thus it's alike your character has two powers. Removing or greatly reducing, the speed-skill. Pretty much is what i'm asking/needing. Other than that, this character is more than acceptable.