[@sassy1085] There are just a few issues. 

1. As I said to Skinner, I would like a bit more in the personality section. 

2. The grammar is a bit off. Nothing incomprehensible, but if you could run through everything again just to correct any mistakes, that would be awesome. 

3. Gwen seems incredibly weak. The very first thing the PCs are doing is a jailbreak, and Gwen doesn't seem to have any items or skills to deal with that. The "fast talker" trait could be useful elsewhere though, so I suggest keeping that. Of course, this is all just suggestion. You can keep her at this level if you really want. 

4. Just a minor nitpick i have, the "spell list" has your skills in it, whereas it should have your spells.