I'm just going to type down my thoughts after reading the entries that weren't mine. [hider=And she was quoted as saying...]... Hm. Does ”me” and ”tragedy” rhyme? It certainly doesn't according to my mind, but since I was recently wrong about ”see” and ”reality”, it made me question reality. … Haha, get it? Because it was my pronounciation of the word ”reality” that I questioned, and... … Pffth, taha, hahahahahahaha... XD You made me laugh. Good job. Though, there's too little circumstance that say that the person saying it actually hates what she got famous for, so you likely won't win, but... I laughed. That's a win enough, right? XD[/hider] [hider=OPRAH NO!]Um. Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuum. Uh. Khk. Hahahahaha. Gosh. That's... that's some mental imagery. I'm, uh, unsure how to review this. XD I was amused, estranged and I don't know what. It was a funny read, though, with some real strangeness going on here. I assume it means he became famous because... … … XD Gosh. Poor kid. What a life he has lived. And yikes. That prison sentence. Hahahaha. I'm just, um. I'll leave the review to Terminal. Know I was amused by it. XD[/hider] [hider=For Ken]... Well. That was certainly unique. And yes, that last scene made me really want to slam my hands into my desk and go all Phoenix Wright with that poor contradictory testimony. Though, yes, that was entirely intentional. So, famous for something he hated, huh? It isn't exactly supremely clear, but it was made clear he didn't exactly agree with the racism around town, so becoming a hero for them to rally under and go to war for probably wouldn't have been entirely agreeable with him, no. Haha. It's nicely written. I'm finding myself at a loss for more to say. Randomly finding aliens on the roadside is weird, but that was intentional. I believe you got across what you wanted to. Haha.[/hider] [hider=Closure]I believe this story would have benefited from a bit more information. I see what's going on, she became famous for killing someone she was close to because he was a demon or something, when it was entirely an accident. But, that last paragraph ended so very quickly, and I'm not entirely sure who exactly she put a knife through. A little too many commas there. Hm. But, yes. Your method of telling a story is fine, I just would have liked to know a little more and see a more properly expanded last part. That's the part that the whole labour was about, after all, I'd like to hear a bit more of it. That's that.[/hider] [hider=The Cook-Off]Weeeeeeeeeeell. I am afraid I must comment, it's not all that appealing to monitor someone who's constantly in a bad mood. XD But, yeah. As far as I can see, you've definitely accomplished the labour. It was obvious how the entry was going to go from the first surprise to the last, your narrative technique is as sharp as ever. But, yes. Ethan wasn't very appealing to listen to. Especially not when he was being so very rude to the hosts or how in the last scene he started rambling again. When on TV, he could at least have been on his best behavior... But suppose that's not a requirement. Oh, well. Yeah, my enjoyment of the entry was unfortunately affected by your choice of character. That aside, nice story. That's about that. Haha.[/hider]