[@PlatinumSkink]  HAha, well, for me "me" and "tragedy" do rhyme, but I'm the one that says "see" and "reality" rhyme.  =P  Where are you from?  My wild guess is Aussieland, but I am as likely wrong as not.

I came over here to say I enjoyed your story.  And from the beginning, Steven felt a bit ominous.  I can't put my finger on it, but I suspected he wasn't the great guy he seemed to be.  Charity has a lot of power, but as this is a story and not an rp, that's not so much an issue, and you handled it well.  Her changing her nature to be what was needed was the final kick in the gut.  I have feels.  And I may need to read Apocalypse Maiden.  <3