Hey guys, thanks for all the suggestions and advice. I really appreciate the help because I'm very new to this kind of role playing. A couple of edits I've made to the overall roleplay are:

1. Polished up some grammar mistakes and removed some technical stuff that wasn't supposed to be there.

2. Removed the option to play as a "light character" and instead I am going  to focus on reworking the whole magic system, as I realized that it was very confusing and some of it is not even considered magic. 

3. Currently working on making a basic rule set for the roleplay 

4. Working on changing the overall story to make it smaller and less confusing.

If you have any other suggestions feel free to post them. I appreciate all the help!