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[hider=Sharing my location]Well. If you want to know, then yes. I can share that. I'm Swedish. The vast majority of my learning English was through video games and movies, in addition to that my mother read books to me in the language. I remember at my first ever English-lesson, I was already partly fluent in the language. Though, it's highly likely that I simply got the pronunciation of "y" wrong in some words, as it wasn't my native language. Some mistakes are to be expected.

It feels so strange, though. I looked up specific scenes where I knew people said the word "reality". Listening to them say it, they actually said "realitee". But, in my memory, both BEFORE and AFTER listening again, I still hear "reality". I just can't remember them saying "realitee" unless I am specifically listening for it, not even in my memories. Oh, well.[/hider]

[hider=Response to feedback]Teh-heh. I'm happy to hear you enjoyed the story. I enjoyed writing it. Somehow, I really like that world, enough that it's now one of few I've written two entries in. Yupp, your points have been noted. I wanted Charity to feel some real despair, so I kind of needed her pillar of trust to be a... haha. And yes, the ending... well... was kind of needed to connect that she's the same person that's in... hahaha... but I found that it was very fitting with the labour. I imagined I could make it a nice little twist. Looks like it went well, with at least one reader. Thank you~

If you do wish to read Apocalypse Maiden (and haven't found it before now), [url=http://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/3118195]a quick search through the victory archives should do[/url]. Only if you really want to, of course, it's a comparatively long read. I would also like to point out that not everything might connect perfectly between the entries, some things went just... slightly off from my thinking, as the two entries were developed very independently. But, yes. Anyways. That's all. Haha.[/hider]