[@sassy1085] While I appreciate your efforts, there are still many issues.

I'm looking for more general quality in writing and character depth. Please keep to a past tense, limited third person point of view while writing the Biography. You occasionally change tenses it seems. Maybe have another major life event? Or, possibly, write some more of her life in hell. That could also benefit her in a different area:

"Gameplay" related reason. Simply hacking and "Dataslabs" (do you mean manufacturer? Software production? Coding?) isn't really that much. If you need a niche to fill, maybe make her a spell caster? Adventures in hell could give her some cybernetics to make her a bit more useful. Also, she can have more than 3 skills. 

Overall, I suggest a fresh start for a clear head, but you could certainly remake Gwen (though retyping her Bio would be heavily suggested either way simply because of the grammar.)