[@RomanAria][@Terminal]  So I take it that mdk got this round's version of Ineffable Grace, or whatever?  Way to go, [@mdk]!

I think the entry where Term did a mockup is in fact only stylistic and technical corrections.  While yes, the story could be better worded and more tightly composed, and while the various stylistic issues may detract, I would argue that they are not wrong, per se.  It's not so overwhelmingly error-ridden as to severely detract, just enough to be noticeable -- and honestly, given the wide range of writing I see floating around, I think it's at least middle of the road.  However, given that the reason for failing the entry was not so much the stylistic issues as the lack of a solid story, I can't dispute the verdict.  A pity, that.