[@ELGainsborough]
No problem. I'm about to head up the road and get that lunch I mentioned, but I wanted to think over the punctuation improvements first. If there's any problems let me know, like I said, but it sounds like you're satisfied with my reply.

Also, I'm going to be editing my character sheet's picture once I get back; I want to reverse the image to emphasize his left-handedness. Sort of surprised I didn't think of it sooner, honestly.