Aside from the one small error below from your character bio, [@SushiJaguar], everything in your sheet is good to go:
[quote]The Lord could not keep his focus with both of his hands missing, and the Apprentice was long-fled by the time Rinko-Rinko cunningly employed a Trakáta strike to remove the Sith's remaining hand.[/quote]
This seems to imply that the sith lord was three-handed or that time was knotted up. But as its such a minor thing and easily fixed, it is not worthy of a full new review process. If you fix that, your sheet is approved.


No such things spotted on your sheet, [@The Dow Dragon]. 


Therefore, both of your sheets are to be considered approved and can be posted in hiders in the CS tab.


Note that you can change things on your sheet in the future too, so long as they’re not locked by anything in the IC. However, we would appreciate being notified of such changes, unless they’re obvious (like a character being… disarmed… by a wookiee in the IC)


In general, both of your sheets were very nice creations even before the first reviews, and they have only improved.