Okay, [@Howler], Stheno is [b]Approved[/b] [@CelticSoldier] I'm hesitant to give this a full approval, just because I have some concerns with how Ambrus seems a little one-note for me. The greatest flaw is supposed to be something that could, if unchecked, lead your character to be slumped over, crying with their eyes torn out as they regret everything they've done. Elaborate a bit more on his flaws, make him more human. And I think you may have misunderstood what the Skills section is supposed to be. I already know in his greatest Strengths section that he is as slick as snake oil, I want to see what *other* skills he has. Can he use that sword, or is it just for show? How good is he at sailing? Fill some of that out a bit more. Make those few changes, and you've got a full approval.