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Name : Chester Caraway 
Alias: The Disturbed Doctor 
Age: 20
Appearance: he is tall about 6'2" and has a barrel chest and broad shoulders his physic is in prime condition at all times his diet and musculoskeletal system finely cared for. He has icy blue eyes with a ring of gray around the pupils . His hair is a light grayish brown and pulled back in a messy ponytail. He wears a lab coat and a tan dress shirt with suspenders and brown pants with dress shoes.
Personality:he has multiple personality quirks and suffers from mild schizophrenia and bipolar disorder he has a habit of making people uncomfortable with tales of past successful and unsuccessful surgical stories
Background: he came from a small island ravaged by disease war and famine his father was killed and he was taken in by a triage doctor he studied with the man for the greater part of his life before man was executed the two for a long time searched for new methods and experiments to bypass hunger and thirst or to repair the body he was treated as a dangerous entity.
Weapons: steel darts/ randomized chemical compounds
Abilities: eidetic learning from books. Razor fine eye hand control. 
Position: doctor
Negatives: ADD like behavior and forgets to label things . DANGEROUSLY curious 
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First thing, please try to put some more effort into your punctuation, mainly the ending punctuation, please.    

The personality section needs to be at least a full paragraph long.  So it needs three more sentences.

The biography is a bit hard to understand because of the punctuation issues. Could you clean it up a little. 

What kind fighter is he?  How does he use his abilities in a fight?

What about techniques?  Our characters are just starting out so they don't have a wide range of abilities under their belts but I'd at least like to see each person with a technique or two.