[@WrongEndoftheRainbow] You've got a good start, I'd be remiss if I didn't mention that I had hoped at least one character nation would be a bit more peaceful-which you seem to have achieved, although a military dominance would suggest that force is the primary motivator for peace. For clarity sake, maybe you could pick another naming convention (my nation is a hegemony) maybe [b] Dominion, Mastery, Sovereignty, Authority[/b] ? Also, I'd like you to include some background that incorporates other players (and by extension the galaxy) lore, for instance, how do they view the Golgotha and the destruction of the Llyr Empire? What are the Hekreans views on FTL bans? Planet Killing Weapons?