Nope! I am 150% sure it’s not a burden! So, that’s all good and settled, yeah? And I will be doing just that! Feel free add in your own ideas, of course!

Yay!

Awesome. Glad to have you on board! Do you want to do just one, then, or both?

Ha! That was fun to read. You definitely did a lot better with the paragraphs! Good job! To hopefully put it simply with paragraphs, it’s with a new topic, time, place, speaker (or otherwise long dialogue broken with actions, for the sake of readability and to prevent an unwieldy long paragraph), or for dramatic effect. A single word could be in its own paragraph, and still be considered a paragraph!

[hider=My thoughts, if you’d like them!]

> Why does it not surprise me that the crazy cat lady/gossip drives a black Sadan? 

> “... and William was William.” *Grins.*

> Again, your skill with personalities! <3 <3 <3

> I’m torn between thinking Mrs. Saxon deserved that, and that Ghent was a jerk. xD His reaction and how he played, her though! Fantastic!

> “... his meow sounded thick and warbled.” I like that description!

> Gosh, William. Why must you be such a cat?

> Wish [i]I[/i] could answer my phone while running. I’d probably either fall on my face, or drop and break the phone. Or both. My money would be on both.

> ... I think I’m part Axel.

> Stolen by wolves. Give the kid a cookie for that theory! :lol

> “Time had warped its appearance, but that didn't seem to bother William.” <-- Oooo. That. Such a good word, warped! Such a simple, yet powerful description overall that provides a strong imagery. Plus it sounds awesome. Odd question: can I add that line to my book of quotes? Attributing it to you, of course!

> Again, I’m torn between feeling sorry for Ghent’s misfortunes, and thinking he deserves them. I love how it’s one thing after the other. All for the gosh darn cat. Shows how much he wants/needs that money!

> I love that entire chase, including the open opportunity there! It was amusing and enjoyable to read.[/hider]

Regarding the indentation issue (though I really don’t mind double returns, if that’s easier):
I use Word for most of my replies. The tab button works the same on the site as it does in Word. The most I can offer as to a reason it didn’t transfer is that the auto indent is set, which the site won’t register. Check the ruler at the top of your document, and make sure both the arrows up there are at the zero mark. The top one is the auto indent. If that’s pushed over, then it won’t register that you pressed “tab,” just that you started a new paragraph, and automatically indent it the desired space. If the top triangle pops back over once you hit “tab” in the body of the document, backspace so the curser is left-flushed and the triangle back at zero, tap that space bar, [i]then[/i] press “tab.” That and all the following paragraphs should then let you manually enter the indentation. Keep an eye on it, though. I know it still pops over to the half-inch mark upon occasion for me. I use 2016, but that’s worked on previous versions I’ve used as well. Hope that helps!