[@Fenris123]The story is acceptable now if you moved him down to a squad member of one of Sho's raider divisions but not as a captain. Sho's division leaders are typically the more experienced pilots with few exceptions. but I'd like to hear the others opinions on it. Likewise I'd like to tell you that your grammar is pretty poor at times. For example: you have sense, instead of since. That may be irritating to some. I can mind it as long as the posts are legible.