Well fortunately, the CS looks good so far. Nothing of any real issue. Just a minor thing however.

[@Asura] With a flat 10 int, you're missing one more skill point for your paladin. She should have a rank in at least two skills, but right now she only has one. Also a greatsword crits from 19-20, not 1-20.

[@Fubsy] With a Con of 15 and d12 hit die, you should have 14 HP not 15. You don't get the HP/Skill/Favor class bonus at level 1, only level 2 and every level afterwards.

[@Grey] Nothing of note so far, though I should explain to you that Deadeye Bowman only allows her to ignore soft cover provided by bodies in her way, like your ally standing in front of your shot or a hostage. Someone with soft cover from other things will not be affected by the trait. 

Lastly, what did you guys do for your money and equipment? Usually I just go with 150 starting gold, which should be reflected accordingly in you character sheets. Otherwise I can accept players starting off with equipment that is over 150 within reason. Asura's character's equipment is already 200 GP (Greatsword is 50 gp and her Chainmail is 150), but if that's all she has then I can accept that. Generally speaking if it's under 150 you can have it, but anything else over that and I'll have to give it a look. I can't promise you that you'll get much treasure or money, so value what you got.

[@Ermine] I'd prefer not to use third party supplements. I can accept certain things on the individual basis, but for the most part I would shy away from any classes or archtypes that aren't from paizo.