[@XenoCyanide][@Thinslayer]
Yes I think that Xeno's reply seems quite about right.  You've been basically too structuring as your job as GM and I know that it is a big responsibility but if you make sure to keep both a kind and gentle hand on the RP as well as making sure that everything is in order that would be nice.  Just a suggestion here because as soon as I entered the RP I felt like everything was so forced and structured and hard wired.