[@Keyguyperson]

No serious objections from me on your nation. They'll certainly cause quite a stir with my own, however. Most probably won't be too fond of the idea of humans being subjugated, especially with their capital works being called Terra Nova, and one of yours being Nova Terra. Bit worrying to them.

[@Durandal]

If I'm to be completely 100% honest... the whole space ponies thing brings up a bit of a red flag, but otherwise they're a pretty well written sheet with nothing wrong with it. So you've got an okay from me.