[@Emuxe] ok so im almost done, i wanna get your thoughts i recommend reading over the whole thing again, i went a lot more in depth and changed some things also i accidentally created a race of sorts (you'll understand once you read it) idk if you want to include it or not, or if it fucks with any of your plans my mind just went fucking crazy with this character, im having so much fun with it if you'd rather not have something like this just lemme know i can reuse the idea elsewhere and reimagine the character [hider=WIP almost done] [center][b][h1][color=7CBFEF]Kaezira, of the North[/color][/h1][/b] [img]http://i.imgur.com/hlFv2Ia.png[/img] [img]http://abhishek.mit.edu/images/line.png[/img] [u][b][color=7CBFEF][h3]Basic Information[/h3][/color][/b][/u] [color=7CBFEF][b]Full Name:[/b][/color] Kaezira Winters [color=7CBFEF][b]Sex:[/b][/color] Male [color=7CBFEF][b]Age:[/b][/color] 18 at death, 7 years since death. 25 total. [color=7CBFEF][b]Birth Date:[/b][/color] December 15th [color=7CBFEF][b]Race:[/b][/color] Previously Humani, now Wraith (afterlife, ghost) In depth, a wraith is when a restless soul passes, and it retakes a new supernatural form. It's physical body becomes a manifestation of the deceased's clothing and armor, its soul, and its memories. Wraiths do not sleep, as they are restless souls. They also do not eat as they are only physical forms of a spirit. A wraith form is overwhelmingly more powerful than a living form, but is not indestructible. A wraith can be killed, and the spirit will remain restless for its eternity after death. Once a wraith has completed its task to become peaceful once more, its spirit will be released from the form. [color=7CBFEF][b]Alignment:[/b][/color] Nephlim [img]http://abhishek.mit.edu/images/line.png[/img] [u][b][color=7CBFEF][h3]Appearance[/h3][/color][/b][/u] [color=7CBFEF][b]Hair Colour:[/b][/color] N/A [color=7CBFEF][b]Eye Colour:[/b][/color] N/A [color=7CBFEF][b]Face Shape:[/b][/color] N/A [color=7CBFEF][b]Skin Tone:[/b][/color] N/A [color=7CBFEF][b]Height:[/b][/color] 6'5, 183cm [color=7CBFEF][b]Weight:[/b][/color] 150lbs, 68kg [color=7CBFEF][b]Body Type:[/b][/color] Slender [color=7CBFEF][b]Natural Markings:[/b][/color] N/A [color=7CBFEF][b]Scar(s):[/b][/color] N/A [color=7CBFEF][b]Tattoo(s):[/b][/color] N/A [img]http://abhishek.mit.edu/images/line.png[/img] [u][b][color=7CBFEF][h3]Personality[/h3][/color][/b][/u] [color=7CBFEF][b]3 Words:[/b][/color] Cold Winter's Wrath [color=7CBFEF][b]Like(s):[/b][/color] Using his magic. [color=7CBFEF][b]Dislike(s):[/b][/color] Fire Magic and Fire Elementals. [color=7CBFEF][b]Want(s):[/b][/color] Kaezira's goal is to avenge his fallen people. [color=7CBFEF][b]Fear(s):[/b][/color] His biggest fear is wasting the second chance he has received to avenge his people, in the form of reanimation. [i][b][color=7CBFEF][h3]Favourite...[/h3][/color][/b][/i] [color=7CBFEF][b]Colour(s):[/b][/color] Light blues, White [color=7CBFEF][b]Time of Day:[/b][/color] Late Night [color=7CBFEF][b]Food:[/b][/color] Roasted Marshmallows [color=7CBFEF][b]Animal:[/b][/color] Bear [color=7CBFEF][b]Place in Terra:[/b][/color] Northern Mountains [img]http://abhishek.mit.edu/images/line.png[/img] [u][b][color=7CBFEF][h3]Skills and Attributes[/h3][/color][/b][/u] [i][b][color=7CBFEF][h3]Skills[/h3][/color][/b][/i] [color=7CBFEF][b]Special ablilty/ies:[/b][/color] Ice magic [color=7CBFEF][b]Good at...:[/b][/color] Spellcasting [color=7CBFEF][b]Bad at...:[/b][/color] Cooking [i][b][color=7CBFEF][h3]Traits[/h3][/color][/b][/i] [color=7CBFEF][b]General:[/b][/color] He, and all wraiths, speak with a layered, echoed voice. The voices of the wraith's fallen kin accompany its own. [color=7CBFEF][b]Good Habit(s):[/b][/color] Mindlessly kind and well mannered. [color=7CBFEF][b]Bad Habit(s):[/b][/color] Acting rash and violent when angry. [img]http://abhishek.mit.edu/images/line.png[/img] [u][b][color=7CBFEF][h3]History[/h3][/color][/b][/u] [i][b][color=7CBFEF][h3]The Past[/h3][/color][/b][/i] Kaezira was born as one of the Vinterkin tribe, native to the north, inhabiting the mountains. The Vinterkin are a family tribe, they put their fellow tribe members before themselves, and they protect their tribe at all costs. The Vinterkin are territorial, whats theirs is theirs, and the only way anyone else can have it, is if they kill the Vinterkin first, which is not an easy task. The Vinterkin are fierce warriors. The children, boys and girls, are trained at young ages to fight with their signature ice magics. Many of techniques using their unique magic have been created and mastered by many of their kind over the years. Kaezira was son of the head of the tribe, the Hødvig, "Tauzin, the Mighty". Tauzin Winters was a strong, burly, pure hearted and loving man, and he was the Vinterkin's fiercest warrior. He fearlessly led the Vinterkin through everything they had endured. His mother, Haelden, passed soon after Kaezira was born. Haelden was a very loving partner to Tauzin, and she had stuck with him through sorrow and triumph. Kaezira, being the son of the Hødvig, was expected to become the new leader once Tauzin had passed. This brought him great distress, as he looked up to his father has his hero. Kaezira wanted to be just like his amazing father, but feared that he could not become as strong and fearless as his father, and would be a poor leader to the Vinterkin. One seemingly peaceful night, a terrible event sealed the Vinterkin's fate. An unknown evil army attacked the Vinterkin villages, mercilessly killing everyone in the tribe. Many woke and fought to defend their tribe and home. Battle raged, but the Vinterkin could not put up a strong fight againts the fire the evil army used against them. Kaezira and his father were the last two of the Vinterkin standing, and they fought alongside each other until their very last breath. After putting up as strong as a fight they could, Tauzin fell first before Kaezira's eyes. The sight of his home village burning, his people perishing, and his father's death enraged Kaezira. His full potential was unleashed, and he fought against the evil army with all of his power, though it was not enough. Kaezira took down many foe, but he was eventually overcome by the army's natural advantages. Soon after the battle, and the evil army's leave, Kaezira's spirit was reanimated as a wraith. Legends say, there was once, long ago, a hero of the Vinterkin named Kaezira. He was the guardian of the Vinterkin. In an important battle, the hero Kaezira was slain, and all moral was lost for the Vinterkin warriors. They quickly started to be overcome by the opposers, but Kaezira's vengeful spirit awoke as a wraith. The hero fought effortlessly against the foe with amazing power, and eventually won the battle with ease. He was once more at peace, knowing that his tribe was safe, and his spirit was released by the wraith form. Kaezira knew he had to eradicate the evil army that slaughtered his tribe to lay his spirit to rest, but he knew that even in a wraith form, he could not overcome them on his own. He soon set off travelling, seeking to further master his power and avenge his people by defeating the evil army. [i][b][color=7CBFEF][h3]The Present[/h3][/color][/b][/i] [At least 2 paragraphs] [b][u]WIP[/u][/b] [i][b][color=7CBFEF][h3]Memories[/h3][/color][/b][/i] [Can be in dot points] [b][u]WIP[/u][/b] [/center] [/hider]