[@Yogananda]

As my fiancé said previously, I suggest you give a thorough read over all my rules and tutorials in the opening post before you post up a 'Public CS' like this (same goes for the 'Private CS' you sent). I've put a lot of rules and specifications for how character sheets have to be presented, the way writing works here, and the sort of images we're using, and you've more or less ignored a lot of it.

Also, the 'Private CS' had a lot of information (such as 'Biography') pretty much listed as unknown -- you've completely missed the point that it's impossible for your character to keep secrets in this role-play from certain NPCs. The characters were invited here because someone knows [i]everything[/i] (personality, history, secrets, thoughts, et cetera) about them, and so the whole point of the 'Private CS' is to allow me to write those who possess such knowledge of your character without all that information being spoiled to the other players. There's no exceptions to this -- [i]every[/i] player character must follow the rules, regardless of how long they'll remain alive.

Until this is all taken into account, I'll avoid commenting about the character themselves. I like the idea of the unique culture this character has compared to the rest of our cast so far, but you'll need to put a lot of work into this if I'm going to be able to accept it -- I'm not able to as it currently is, since it'll be unfair to both myself and to everyone who followed all my rules. If you have questions, feel free to run them by me, but I've got no intention of compromising my rules.

Normally I'd say this over PM instead of in the thread, but I want anyone else who enters this thread to consider this a valuable reminder. I'm aware that I pointed you in the direction of this thread, but that doesn't change the situation.

[@tsukune]

Looking cool, and we've already gone over everything we needed to. Epic piece of music by the way -- I've been listening to it a lot since this CS introduced me to it. I've never gotten around to watching that anime, but if this is the quality of its OST then I'm definitely gonna look into the other tracks. Anyway, good work -- this has been accepted, so I'm just waiting on the 'Private CS' now.

On a side note, we've finally got another guy. The curse of the 'let's give Bonaparte (or Leonard) a harem' has been [i]slightly[/i] lifted.

[@Ailyn Evensen]

Honestly not surprised you picked that piece of music, since it fits the character and it's always been a favourite of yours -- I like it a lot too, and I've been listening to it similar to tsukune's pick. Since we'd discussed things beforehand over phone and whatnot, I've obviously got no problems here and I'll just be waiting for the 'Private CS' before getting you to post this over to the character tab. I already know that what you've got planned for it's appropriate, but I figured it's best to follow standard procedure so no one feels like I'm giving you special treatment. I'm really liking this character though, so looking forward to seeing her in action.