[@Shmektheshmuck] Ah, every time I'm not on there's so many replies! Sorry!! >_<

But I do have to say he's a [i]little[/i] on the overpowered side. The lead worshipper and the leader of MANA are supposed to have the powers in the range of a lower demi god, if that helps any. I think it would be fine if 'he' had some sort of physical handicap due to his overexcessive amount of magical strength, which I think you were going for? If you can tone it down just a teensy bit, he's definitely accepted, that's an awesome character! ^^