[@DeltaV] Here is my revision. Just to save time and effort, if this is good with you, am I clear to post up my CS?

[hider= Abilities Revised]
Rust is the inheritor of the cosmic power of the last dragon. His body is filled with supernatural strength and vitality, as well as the overwhelming energy of the stars themselves. Rust can channel this power into sorcery, the lost arts of magic learned from the stars. By bending the laws of reality and the whims of destiny, Rust can exert power and force from a range, teleport short distances rapidly, or generate structures of mystic obsidian. With more advanced incantations, favorable constellations overhead, and access to focusing loci, Rust can bend time and space, among other more powerful techniques.

While Rust's mortal form his stronger and more resilient than a normal human, it is still insufficient to channel the raw draconic energy that pours from his glowing heart. However, when Rust is in need of this almighty power, he can take on the shape of the divine dragon to facilitate this overwhelming energy. My carefully crafting paper-thin layers of mystic obsidian over himself, Rust can assume the become a simulacrum of a true dragon; a golem of shining, black muscle and delicate, glowing membrane. While too much of his focus is dedicated to maintaining this form to use sorcery, he is now able to tap into the destructive power of his nuclear heart. He is immensely strong and nigh-indestructible in this form, capable of soaring through the sky, and can rend his foes with starfire and invisible waves of agonizing, toxic energy. However, this form is still imperfect, and cannot dissipate the buildup of heat its powers generate. Rust grows weaker, his control over this form slipping, as this heat builds up. Gradually radiating out the heat solves this issue, but in emergencies Rust can release all of this pent-up energy at once in an all-consuming meltdown. An even more glaring flaw in his draconic form is that to allow the release of heat and energy, his nuclear heart and human body are both exposed, rather than hidden away deep in the dragon's stony flesh. While covered by an orifice that is equal parts sphincter and toothy maw, the dragon's heart is still a notable vulnerability, moreso when the heart is exposed to vent its excess energies.[/hider]