[@Pirouette] 
Okay.. your character has great potential but.. a few things. She is way too young to have been a sergeant. If she joined at 18 which is a standard age to join any army or military she would have had to been in the army or military going near 14 years before she could hope to be a sergeant and even then she would just be a first ranking sergeant. If you wanted her to be a Sergeant Major she would be about 40 or so now. I'm sorry for being a stickler to realism but it is important to me in this RP. The only other thing is I don't mind you describe the general looks of your town in Glinnery but not the whole country. Glinnery is the "rich" country so to speak so it flocks the rich from all over Draykon.

Aside from that she looks really good! Her skills look great and her armour looks like it would fall under medium armour. 

Let me know when you've adjusted those two little things and I'll look at your character again. =]

Thank you as well for your interest!