[quote=@rush99999]
[@Thinslayer]

It could do with a few more explosions.
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xD

Yes, I think more tension would be useful. Like, if the characters were on a timetable, or they had to "get there in time" for something, there's be more motivation.

I'll keep that in mind. ;)

Does the story need improvement as well? I was wondering if maybe the hype was lost because it wasn't what you were expecting.