[@CowboyCommando] If I may be so bold to thrust my own two cents in, but if your sheet is "monoithic sized" and you're now going into military ranks, I would say you are going to in depth and into too much detail than is healthy. I've seen many people drop or just stop since they wanted their NS to look like a novella. 

I would recommend only getting the minimum barebones onto a sheet, submitting that for review and then fluffing it up afterwards assuming that none of the change dramatically alter the NS (ie putting in the fact you have blackhole torpedoes AFTER your sheet is accepted or something like that). 

There's always a question of want vs what's capable and too much ambition is good for no one. I believe most of the sheets currently accepted where much blander or smaller than how they were submitted for review. I know that my own lacked any formatting besides some bolded section titles and lack any pictures.