This thread is for those of us who really love grammar (but could always use advice and feedback). The structure of sentences and phrases can be difficult, and this is a thread where opinions and thoughts can be shared to help solve some issues. Some sentences (or a grouping of sentences) feel like they need to be simplified. Perhaps they need to be broken apart and expanded. As a community of writers, this thread should provide a place where we can, hopefully, better the basis of our writing skills, Grammar. When to break the rules and when to abide by them. Topics and terminology to share, research further, debate, etc. Share links to articles that explain topics, words, etc. that you or other writers seem to misinterpret, lack understanding in, or just to simply avoid. This is [i]not[/i] a thread to post other RPer's prose/passages for others to tear into, judge, or critique. This is [i]not[/i] a place to post walls of text and have others edit. This is [i]not[/i] an editing thread. (Obvious) Disclaimer: If there is any flaming, critique without construction, derailing, or any other needless negativity, you will be asked to leave and/or reported.