[@Gareth]
You're not quite finished I'm afraid. You haven't added a magic to your character >.>
I mean as long as you add a reasonable magic and nothing too OP to your character then there's nothing wrong with him. I'm sure Vampy won't have anything against it.
I assume by your (very) brief history he used to be some form of thief?
[@Arya10108909]
Not overly familiar with your magic. From my understanding it controls light and shadows right? Not too sure how I feel on that one to be honest. I'm pretty sure you might need to bump the age up slightly as well since this is based in a highschool, so thinking 15 should be the minimum age (though 14 I can live with)
Also a history of some kind would be fantastic XD
[@CandySatan]
Yeah as long as we know a response will come eventually we don't mind waiting. So make a CS if you're interested :D