[@rocketrobie2][@jumpadraw]Hey guys it's getting a little crowded where the other three characters are meeting, so it could be awkward for you to enter the conversation where they're at.  If you'd like we could put the both of you a little farther ahead, already in the city, that way things don't get bogged down with 5 characters all meeting in the same spot and having to make introductions at once.  Just a thought, it's up to you.

[@sassy1085]I don't have any problems with her background or anything, but could you please clean up the grammar on the sheet?  It's kind of confusing because it looks like you didn't proofread it very much.  Also don't forget to list her family sword as a possession.  Thanks!