Alright, review times! [@Crimson Raven] I have no issue with anything you've presented in your CS. You've really created a unique character and I can see why you're proud of him. His personality is to the point but still leaves much to be explored in the IC and the same can be said with his backstory. I like how his strengths and weaknesses are well defined and I can't wait to see some of his creative uses of 'Blast'. [color=green][b][u]Accepted! 2/2[/u][/b] [/color] Feel free to move him over to the CS tab. [@Altered Tundra] Your personality was a joy to read. Asahi seems like such a prominent personality that I am looking forward to seeing how he meshes with the other characters. You've left enough of his backstory open for exploration and as Indra said, I am very curious to hear about his home town. I have nothing else to say except Praise the Sun! [color=green][b][u]Accepted! 2/2[/u][/b][/color] Feel free to move him over to the CS tab. [@Mercurial] Your characters backstory perfectly justifies her personality. She has legitimate reasons for hating the Librarium and I like how her exposure to their corruptness has given her a noble, almost naive, sense of right and wrong. It will definitely lead to some interesting interactions, especially with more morally gray characters like Whirlwind. [color=green][b][u]Accepted! 2/2[/u][/b][/color] Feel free to move her over to the CS tab. [@Raijinslayer] and [@pkken], I will refrain from reviewing your CS' currently because they are unfinished and also because we have a few other people going for the Devil Slayer positions. [@Gowi] It's not bad at all! The opposite in fact. There are layers to her personality that really do a good job of painting a picture of her character. The history is well written and to the point, explaining everything we need to know about her past without revealing too much. It's a yes from me! [color=green][b][u]Accepted! 1/2[/u][/b][/color] Please await the verdict of one other GM.