[quote=@Lunarlors34] [@Gareth] Yeah that looks pretty good. Figured he was a thief by the fact he steals things but wanted to make sure XD [@Arya10108909] Hmm the age is good and I've read up on the magic so that's fine as well (though no one is proficient enough to be super OP so you know XD) [@CandySatan] Hmmm. A demon? Considering the universe this is based in, that might post a slight problem but on the other hand that would also be a fairly interesting plot point. [@Vampy] What do you think? I don't have a huge issue with it, though the students might XD [/quote] Well [@CandySatan] i love your char, i have a similar case since there are differed kinds of demons. I belief that you had a succubus in mind ( say it if i'm wrong.) Then i can help you a lot with your char since i love that kind of stuff :D [@Arya10108909] Could plz add your bio and personality of your char and I really dont know what your chars power is so if you could explain it that would be great. [@Gareth] your chars power is way to OP, that distance is just NOT oké at all. What you could do is that your char had the power to summon spirit swords, If he "lvl up" his skill with summoning them the more he can get. If that sound good or if you have a other solution I would be happy to hear it. Further I here by am happy to welcome you all, you dont have to post every hour since I live in an other time zone than the most of you. But If you won't be able to post for a while plz let me or [@Lunarlors34] know.