[quote=@NarayanK]
[@Crimmy] can you give me more specific feedback plz :( I know most people here don't care too much if their characters aren't on my drawings but feedback is lifeblood of an artist, especially when they're not good at drawing
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Try sitting on a bed in the pose you drew Sangue is.

It's not one that you'd naturally wake up and get up in.