[@zellected] Review time!

Okay so personality; I have to say I quite like where your going with this character. I can see what you're aiming for, but I do have to point out that as great as you've explained his traits and quirks there is a substantial lack of any flaws. While I don't doubt that Azazel is a good, honorable person; he is still human and is therefore flawed by nature in some way.

From the way his personality has been written he appears to be level headed with a strong will, appreciating the value of hard work and reaching your goals by your own hand. Though at the same time he believes that helping others is the way one should lead ones life. He's friendly and charismatic with a tactical mind. He does not disrespect his foes, meaning he is not arrogant. He's said to be quite logical, but at the same time he knows when to follow his heart.

The impression I get from this is that you're trying to give him the best of both worlds. Now I'm not saying it's impossible for realistic people to have traits that contradict each other. Though I have to be honest, there doesn't seem to be a single personality flaw listed. I would highly recommend sitting down and really thinking about some of these traits and how his positive traits can be used to create realistic negative ones.

The history is fine. There's some unnecessary details in there that could have been omitted, particularly in the second paragraph during the first time he used his powers. Though you've left enough secrecy to work off of in the IC so I can't complain.

The Magic is iffy because we really don't know a lot about the Arc of Embodiment. It's claimed that there are several limits and restrictions to how it can be used; though we never see any of them in the show. If you can come up with said limitations for the magic then I will be happy to accept it. As it is though, just Arc of Embodiment isn't going to cut it. It's too easy to abuse.

All in all I'm very happy with the concept of your character and I feel with a little tweaking based on my suggestions he'll be ready for acceptance. Until then,

[b][color=orange]Character Acceptance Pending 0/2[/color][/b]