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Okidoki, no worries! Haha whenever you get round to it! :)
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So I made a couple of assumptions:

-I assumed the Tuk'ata would stay back, seeing as...well, Yerbol wouldn't want to scare his parents xD. Feel free to correct that if need be. Wouldn't mind if they came or stayed :)

-I also assumed that Saresh would have put out some kind of public proclamation giving a general overview of what had occurred. I think it might be kinda cool to have Saresh give a sort of "State of the Union" address on the holonet? We wouldn't have to write it word for word, but I think it would help kind of ease us into "Yerbol and Aria are heroes, not terrorists!" Cause, ya know, they weren't exactly given a great reputation xD

What do you think?
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-Oh yeah, definitely a good idea to make them stay on the ship at least for now since they ARE pretty terrifying ahaha they can always introduce them later on once they're a bit better acquainted if it becomes necessary XD

-Ohh, good idea, yes! I hadn't thought of that, but good thinking batman! XD I shall work mention of it into my next post then! Which will be up for you by the time you're back tomorrow cuz I gotta hit the sack soon :P

Also, I love Vol already, just gonna put that out there. He's great XD

EDIT: post achieved! Excuse any typos in the beginning bits I wrote them right before crashing out last night hahaha
Looking forward to meeting Bol's mom though, didn't want to go too far ahead to give you an opening to do that how you like so I kinda focused a lot on Ari's reactions XD figured the "oh my God do I REALLY sound like that?! O_o" was a good little thing to add cause it'd be much more obvious in a mostly Republic base lol
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Nice handling of the speech! Thanks for that :)

Haha, yessss. Basically, Vol(or Volgorl) is just Yerbol older. He's ALSO sort of an adaptation of a character I normally play in medieval fantasy/dragon age threads, which means that his wife is also going to be an adaptation of a character that one of my former roleplay buddies came up with(bless her heart, but personal stuff really took a toll on her).

Aww, Ari. Prepare for her to have to deal with humans that greet her warmly...which may or may not disorient her xD
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Yay, no worries, glad I could get the general gist across, feel free to add anything if you feel it necessary XD

Awww that is a real shame D: well I look forward to meeting her! Ari shall be preparing herself as I think it's certainly going to be a bit of a culture shock for her compared to what she's used to lol
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So feel free to skip to the next morning cause Yerbol is about to share some deep feelings on their date in the next post xD
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Aaaahh oh my gosh, that's got me stupidly excited all of a sudden XD

Working on something now, might be a little on the short side cause I don't want to run TOO far ahead lol

EDIT: also, a bit late for it (dang it) but I found another awesome song by RED to add to the playlist that would have been perfect for before they killed Bracknell XD
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Apologies for the gargantuan wait for this post ;w; I kept getting pulled away to do boring real life things XD Hopefully my attempt at adding a bit of fluff on the end makes up for it hehe :P

I am super excited for Yerbol to let all his feelings out, my gosh...this is going to be such a big step for both of them o.o Our babies are growing up! *sniffs* XD
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I know, right?! I'm going to wait until tomorrow to post because I'll need all the power in my arsenal to make this turning point a worthwhile read. *cracks knuckles*

Thanks for the set up by the way! Saves me some trouble, although I'll still be writing in how nervous of a wreck Yerbol is ALONG with some conversations that Yerbol sneaks in with his parents a couple of hours before Aria awoke(also, good point mentioning that they would sleep for that long. Seriously, when was the last time they got undisturbed rest?) Here in a minute, I'm going to post some character likenesses for the parents, seeing as I feel like I picked the two that best represent them in my mind anyway.

Edit: Posted character likenesses!

Edit edit: So you're good with me just going right into his feelings, then? Or do you want a lead up post? Don't mind either way. Need to know so I can include specific details for either scenario.
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Eeeek I shall be waiting with eager anticipation! *bounces in seat* XD

Didn't want to go TOO far ahead cause I wanted to kind of give you free reign with it, and ikr! If I were them I totally would have slept that long too hehe :P

My gosh, Yerbol does actually look just like a younger version of his daddy (unless he just happens to be the same guy because I can't quite tell XD), Tabitha is also lovely (and I'm sure I recognise her from somewhere but I can't put my finger on it o.o)

I'm cool with either too really, so whichever strikes you as best? XD I can't wait to see what you come up with!
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Oh man, I'm so hyped about this post. About...a third of the way done? Will be done in the next couple of hours
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Ahhh I'm getting so hyped about it too, you're not the only one! *bounces on the spot like a silly fangirl* XD I shall be eagerly awaiting the reveal haha
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There we go! :)
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Oh my gosh, Yerbol is such a cutie! ;w; that moment of epiphany was adorable, and I think his little speech might have melted my heart a little (till I got to the bit about the milk and then I just about snorted in laughter XD) (consider Ari's completely a puddle as far as that's concerned XD)

Working on something now!
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Tah dah! Ari had some pretty deep stuff to say as well, she kinda took over there but I guess it's as appropriate a time as ever for that to happen lol *wipes away tear*
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What a 180 degree turn Aria has made since their first encounter in that tomb. I really do love how you had her emphasize how stupid she thought he was for a while(let's be honest, he IS a rather bold idealist), but then it grew on her.

Nyawwww, these two! Got the warm and fuzzies now xD

Also, feeling a LOT of relief. I mean, yes, romantic tension is great to write for a while, but man alive I just wanted them to profess their love already! xD

Now, before I post, I feel like we've reached a "checkpoint" of sorts, which means we have a LOT of room to determine the next Act. I'll post my thoughts in the characters tab in...a bit? Maybe next thirty minutes or so? We can exchange some ideas, then go from there?
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They've both grown a lot since then I think! Even Yerbol has gone from someone who just wanted to bring justice unto every Sith for being a blight on the galaxy to being able to work together with a bunch of them to help preserve the good of the whole galaxy (not to mention actually opening up enough to be friends with Ari after what happened with Lysa, because like she kinda said that must have been HARD for him even with the whole 'restrain your emotions' thing o.o)

Warm and fuzzies abound! I'm so proud of these two kiddos (and I share your relief at the feelings all finally being out! XD)

Planning what should happen next also sounds like a great idea, I agree! :D
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Thoughts are up in Characters tab!

And they have grown a ton! Soooo proud of them both :)

Edit: Yeah...Lysa. Thankfully her relationship with Yerbol soured near the end because of her pursuits, but he still loved her, which I'll make evident in the next post.
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Added some to it (yay for new species, much yes for that, that's going to be fuuuuunn o.o)

I really feel for him with the whole thing about Lysa (that's gonna be something Ari probably never really forgives herself for, even if Bol wasn't on the best terms with her before she died, Ari still kind of feels responsible for never giving them the chance to sort that out by being the one that made that swing D: ) ;w; can't wait to hear his thoughts on it
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Oh for sure. There's going to be closure on that front...my fault for not developing it as much as I'd like, but their relationship was...complicated. Too complicated to go through when trying to fight off the True Sith xD

and BLESS YOU a thousand times over for reading up on lore. Things just got SUPER busy here.
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