[quote=@Crimson Raven]
Nope, nope, this format hurts to look at, and is difficult to read.

Here, Parrot, like this: 

Firstly, a Hider. Saves space, looks neat. You can pop one up by clicking the crossed out eye in the text box.

Secondly, spaces. Well placed line spacers really help. Enter key for those.
At least you know about indents...

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Okay, much better, now you can actually read it.

So, I'm no GM, so all my comments here are worth about two sence, but I'm nosy and I'll give my imput anyway. Take it or leave it as you will.

First things first, magic.

Let me sum this up, teleportation a la Fourth Hokage from Naruto, Archive magic, with thousands uppn thousands of books worth of knowlage, steath and "limited strange/lost magic"

Any one of these would be fine, but all together is far too much in. Dispite 19 years of training, you don't just master magic just like that, especially with no mention of a teacher. Wizards devote their entire lives to magic, and still can't say they have mastered one, let alone three. The lost magic, especially is...a no go. One, maybe, multiple? No. 

I see and appreciate what you are trying to do here, a wandering scholar type, but he far too young to have so much knowlage. Try 80 or more.

That leads me into his backstory. There are three things a backstory should achieve: Explain how/why a character has an ability or item, give some reason for why the character has their personality, and thirdly explain where they are and why they are there. The rest should be left to be explained in the IC.

Yours does none of these, and raises more questions then it answers.

Why is he so curious? Who or what is his Pet Parrot? Why is he named Parrot, and so happen to have a pet of the same name? How did he get such powerful magic? Was he taught it? Born with it? What about parents, siblings? Why in the backstory does it say "Sometimes he would inexplicably pop up behind you and be able to tell when something "bad" would happen?" Precognition was not in his powers. What is the mention of the "Chameleon Cloak" in his magic?   Obviously its hides him, but how did he get it? Being able to teach lost magic is again, a huge ixnay. Lost magic is incredibly hard to learn, let alone teach. On top of that, until a decade or two ago, magic was hated, feared and outlawed. Yet there is no mention of that in his backstory.

Wise is also a difficult trait. You can say a character is wise, but you, as the writer, will have to back it up.

Its a moot point now, but with amazing magical capabilities, that much knowlage and magic, he would qualify as S class, and Caits has specifically said that new people with S class immediately is highly discouraged.

His personality is also a little lacking, but thats fine, as long as you know what he will act like IC.
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I recall we asked you to wait until ALL the GMs had said something.